Dissidents; Page 23

Dissidents; Page 23

Ouch. Yvette. That was pretty cruel.

This page originally was written very differently with a very different tone, and when I originally drew this page, I realized I needed to do something else (ah, the joys of being a discovery writer). Since I ‘d gotten to the point where I had the pencils laid out, today and the weekend’s vote incentive is what I had originally planned for this page so you can see the difference. You can also see how messy I sketch on the computer. ;)


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  1. Firefly reference FTW!

  2. Jago of the 7 knives says:

    Yes. Agreed. Firefly reference: “Lots of pretty dresses and ruffles!” from the episode “Shindig”

  3. proud daughter of eve says:

    So, wait, we’re NOT doing the “I don’t like you/I hate you/I love you dance?” Huzzah! Even if they don’t end up together, I like that he seems considerate and courteous of her. She’s not returning it, which is too bad, but it’s clear she’s got issues to deal with.

  4. admin says:

    Haha, that wasn’t intended, but I do love Firefly so it must have ended up there subconsiously.

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