And introducing Mr Humphrey! Figglesby’s correspondant in Dryfast. The major part of Jonathan’s cargo is lorian crystals, which are used for refrigeration purposes, once activated by a Crystal Worker. There is a large mine on an island near St Barnabas, and the crystals get shipped to St Barnabas, then to Dryfast. Bananas are another part of the cargo, and lorian crystals are used to keep them fresh.
LaSalle's Legacy
LaSalle's Legacy webcomic
Ooh, that’s a cool fact about the world :3
Darn those pirates, trying to steal our bananas ~shakefist~
Hm… I wonder if you could forgo the world note there if you changed it to something like…
“It is good to see a shipment of Lorian crystals arrive. Now the United Islands will finally be able to refrigerate their crops again…”
I know, I know, unsolicited opinion, but it might streamline this part. Just my humble opinion ^^
You know, that does seem like a better line. Hrm… I wonder if changing dialogue for the print version would be bad though. Thanks for the suggestion. 🙂