Aaand, that’s it for this chapter! Looks like there will be some interesting stuff happening next chapter.
I’d write more, but I have a cold and still have about 2,000 words to finish for my NaNoWriMo novel, so this will be it today. Remember, I will be on vacation for the rest of the month, but there will still be regular vote incentives and updates. 🙂
I like the way you have handled the story of Capt. La Salle so far and I am looking forward to his and his crew’s further adventures, especially if he (La Salle) and Yvette are destined to become an “item”.
Thank you! 🙂 I’ll keep doing my best!
A) Someday, I’d like to see someone do the “draw the sword and off comes the opponents head” bit with a touch of realism. As in, they draw their sword and swing, and get about a third of the way through. XD Cause I just don’t think a human can do that.
B) Jared’s last line almost sounds like innuendo. Or maybe I’ve just been corrupted by the internet.
C) I love how the other patrons don’t care a whit that someone was just beheaded. 😛
@Puck
Well, you CAN behead someone with a sword. It would have to be a very heavy, 2-handed sword wielded by a REALLY strong man and you would still need a bit of luck, but it could and have been done. Rarely, but still.